I enjoyed this story. The banter was good between the characters and so was the tension. I did have a bit of trouble with the writing at the beginning of the story. It seemed a little stiff or stilted, but it smoothed out as the story went along.I enjoyed the Harry Potter references in regards to...
Not going to rate this because I just couldn't finish. I had difficulties with the writing style...maybe it gets better further in the story but for me the beginning reads like a childs essay for school. Most sentences have the same structure: subject/verb/object. Additionally I had the feeling t...