Well, it has a plot and some characters that you may mildly care about. There was just a lot lacking, maybe editing? For one, a character changed eye color 3 times in about 9 pages. (Noah had brown, then green, then 'dark' eyes.). And the dialogue was very off. It was interesting in the fact ...
After the embarrassing encounter with Robert, she’d barely been able to keep it together. For some reason, the whole thing with Robert was causing her to relive the demise of her relationship with Mark. Finally, she’d left work early with a headache. The twins were getting pretty good at working ...
November 20, 1943 Dear R.J. Ruby Jean, I guess you can see that I messed up and accidentally called you R.J. Sorry about that, but I don’t want to waste paper and start over. I realize that since you’re a grown-up now, we don’t use your nickname anymore. It’s been on my mind lately because Cousin...
Her breath hitched, and she couldn’t get her lungs to expand. She couldn’t breathe, and the realization terrified her. She had to leave this place. But her legs wouldn’t cooperate. She stood paralyzed, straddling the bike with the view of waves crashing against rocks along a rugged beach confront...