Quick short read with likeable characters and nice build up of sexual tension. Lost two stars for a few reasons, firstly the editing which needs tightening up, spelling errors and punctuation in totally the wrong places. Also the author could have put in a little more effort and made this into a ...
Solid 2.5 stars...not much depth...hot but a little dark also...need some more background to feel the intimacy. Wish this was full length and not so vague but it is a short story but I do suggest it be turned into a full length story with character development surrounding both characters and they...
“This is cute,” she said as she looked out the second story balcony to the lake behind the complex. She watched him disappear into another room as she tossed her bag onto the sofa. “Does this pull out?”He walked back out to where she stood. He was carrying his toothbrush and deodorant. “Yes, ...