If the MCs had stuck to the primitive vocabulary of "want" and "mine" instead of choosing to use the dreaded ILYs, this would have left me feeling much more satisfied. As it is, the second half of the story just felt contrived and saccharine - as much as a story with this premise can be saccharin...
The theology’s skewed in its look at the nature of angels and the relationships and differences between humans and angels—but then this isn’t a work of theology, it’s a work of erotica. And for that it works pretty well. One thing though was distracting (and approached humorous, although that c...
Streets were crammed with stalls selling clothing, shoes, art, food. Jiat took me into one of the crowded streets, his collar warm on my throat and his leash leading me through the throng safely. My feet were clad in new sandals, and I had been recently groomed by Kosi. I thought everyone had to ...
