I felt the author had a great story line and it was well written. Brynn O'Connor was able to hold and maintain my attention with the plot twists and turns. However what I hated most about it was the continuous narration. I think that's where the biggest fail is. I wanted more dialog and interact...
The sour smell of unwashed bodies, sweat, cheap perfume, and even cheaper alcohol permeates everything in the tiny motel room. The floor is littered with empty bottles of bargain-basement wine and other spirits. Everywhere you look there are crumpled cigarette packages and overflowing ash trays...