The writing is incredibly amateur, I felt like I was reading a story written by a fourteen year old trying to be edgy by using very vulgar language and crude descriptions. The dialogue was extremely generic...like conversations off of the tv show "Full House"....The ending was awful. Very disappo...
Sydney took Izzy into downtown Kensington. Since people would be out shopping in that area, there was a better chance of them making a little more money from begging. As the two of them sat on a busy street corner, Rock, the drug dealer friend of Syd’s father, approached them. People called him R...