Love this storyline and the setup. Wish Miller would write with a little more flow and passion...the "right to the point" approach leaves a bit to be desired. It reads almost like the bones of a novel that are waiting for their rewrite/edit. Which is a bit distracting.I probably would have given ...
Penny had to glance at the clock. It seemed like minutes ago they were leaving the hotel and now it was almost time for her appointment. Although she was now in an area of the country that she knew fairly well, everything looked surreal. As thoughts of the events to come f...