Incredibly naive writing throughout. Odd use of language, slang and sudden gaining of knowledge for the two main characters who had supposedly been so sheltered for so long. The addition of 'super powers' was even more bizarre.The underlying issue of infertility was very interesting and should h...
He gestured towards the trunk and a change of clothes that would be appropriate for my position in town. I rolled my eyes and changed outfits in the backseat just as we headed towards the stone walls of Genesis. I kept glancing in his rearview mirror, making sure he wasn't watching me disrobe. Al...
The nurse who had administered it had been surprisingly pleasant. She didn't ask where I came from, only wanting to know that I was okay now. I assured her I was fine. The man who had watched over the door left and she showed me towards the showers at the end of the hall. “Just down that way. The...