√This was very good. I was sucked in on an emotional level from very early on in the book. Owen just broke my heart...I think I may have been just as happy to see Mitchel as Owen was, especially considering the circumstances under which they met fot the first time. Mitchel saved Owen on every level. He was a street-wise angel...sigh! And he was gorgeous, young, sexy, horny and well endowed! Good job, Owen! And Owen? Sweet, loyal, passionate, lost and loving...he had enough good in him to keep him from being pathetic, even when he was at his lowest. His goodness was rewarded in the end. On paper, he wasn't to bright. But when he didn't need Mitchel anymore, Mitchel gave him an out. Owen proved he was smart by not taking it, because Owen knew himself. He knew that Mitchel was far more crucial to his future than any material or monetary assets could ever be. Money could help him survive, Mitchel could help him live. This book was on a level that i just couldn't quite reach. I feel like the author tried to put too much story into something that is barely 40 pages. There was no need to throw the little information about whoever the Morgan brothers are is irrelevant and just a side note that took up space. That space could have easily added to the encounter with Coles sister because that scene really seemed to lack something. The emotions were very detached and kind of just stated as if i should feel some type of way by someone explaining the look on their face as being sad! Theres no depth. I know because its so short i cant expect to kind of depth i am used to however a lot of shorts i have read manage to do quite well with capturing me emotionally and mentally. As for the sex … what sex? There was some but no memorable enough for me to say i enjoyed reading it. It all just flew by and i swear i think i missed it all.
What do You think about Be My Boy (2011)?
I absolutly loved this story, thanks so much for writing it! Please consider writing a sequel
—kel
I really enjoyed this one, but my lord it was short!
—bcramer
