Overall the story line was great and loved the humor that was thrown in. I would really like to give this a book 4 out of 5 stars but I just can't. There are many errors throughout the book including grammatical and sentence structure errors. There were many areas where words were out of place, phrases were worded wrong and overall poor proofing before publishing.Now to the story itself. I have read many romance books involving some sort of scheme and a very rich man anywhere from a millionaire to a billionaire with extremely good looks; but this story line was very different. The rich man for once wasn't the one coming up with the original scheme but the woman instead. I love how the two main characters Jude and Ryan have a minor and very brief history before the rest of the story takes off. I very much enjoyed how the characters were written as people who weren't perfect but had some sort of issues. Jude has her crazy friend and Ryan has the loss of a very important family member.For a free book, this was not quite a disappointing read, the only disappointment was the grammatical and sentence structure errors. I'll start by saying, in the description this book is described as 'Explicit chick lit', I would strongly disagree with that. Chick lit, yes. Explicit, NO. Don't get me wrong, it is a sexy read and you'll be wanting a piece of Ryan, but I would say it's more 'saucy' than 'sweet', though definitely not explicit.Anyways enough about that, this book rocks. I absolutely loved it. The writing style is quirky, which only added to the whole charm of it. It is a 'lol' book.I was gutted at the end when I went to look for the next book and realised it's not out yet. Boo hoo, I've gotta wait. Don't worry though folks, this is a complete book, no cliffhangers (yay). The next book is about one of the other characters.I got this book when it was free on Amazon (yes, you all know by now I'm an Amazon Kindle Freebie Whore). Whilst looking for the currently not out yet 2nd book, I noticed this one is now 77p, that is an absolutely shocking price, it should be at least 4 times that amount, it really is worth it. Whilst I am a Freebie Whore, I am prepared to pay for good writing and the author is doing herself a disservice by pricing it so low. When the 2nd book comes out I fully expect to pay about £3.00, because on the strength of this 1st book it should be worth it.
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