This book was great. It was awesome after the last two books in the series were written from Avalon and Jericho's perspectives to re-visit Eden and Kiran and see things from Eden's perspective again. I also enjoyed how the novella detailed how Eden and Kiran escaped from the citadel, as the end of The Relentless Warrior was somewhat lacking in details once everyone else got away. The writing was great and substantially better edited than some of the other books in the series (although there were still occasional errors). The story itself is a bit hard to comment on since it really is just a sideline that accompanies the events of The Relentless Warrior, but I still found it enjoyable and insightful. I love how the author has shown how each main character has grown and become more powerful, yet still retains the same core personality. Overall, a great short-story that has left me excited to see what will happen next in the final book, The Redeemable Prince. So Eden and Kiran are one of my favorite book couples and I LOVED this installment of their story. Although they've been around during The Reluctant King and The Relentless Warrior, this is the first chance we've gotten to get back into Eden's head now that she's not a teenager anymore. Rachel manages to give the heat to their married life without being explicit and all of their interactions, from the battle scenes to the bedroom are great!
What do You think about Breathless Magic (2000)?
I loved that there was more action and it didn't just flow over it!!I want more!!!!
—HangLoose
Boo:( No more of this series! Waaah!!! It was a great great series!
—mathigaro
