This was a great short story and I think it could be fleshed out and turned into an amazing full length novel if the author wanted to do so. Keith and Sarah both harbored have secret crushes on each other since high school but neither one knew the other felt anything. So when they told each other they were both shocked speechless by the fact.Sarah from the beginning saw the loneliness in Keith and wanted to rid him of it...she wanted him at whatever cost...even to agree to Keith's arrangement. Keith only knew one thing...he had to have Sarah at all costs so he offers her a deal, in exchange for her staying at his house for one week (where by day she could do whatever she wanted but by night she had to give Kieth whatever he wanted no matter what) and afterward he would give her the portrait her father painted of her that he had purchased.I would definitely recommend this to people, would I read it again...probably not BUT not because it wasn't good...I just rarely reread books. Keith that boy is all bada**, "a wicked gleam came into his eyes. "I want you in my bed and at my mercy. And I want to ruin you for your vibrator." You know Sarah she secretly has some lady balls and I was proud of her in some parts, "I don't know if we need to or not. I just know that I want to. If you don't, of course that's okay. But if that's the case then I'll be heading home today." I mean Keith can sometimes be an a**, "fine. You'll get your instructions at dinner." He ended the call, and then immediately regretted his abruptness. There was nothing stopping Sarah from changing her mind." I mean there were some parts that were funny that really shouldn't have been funny, but still were, "then her face cleared, and she gripped his pants and boxers in both hands and drew them down over his hips. His erection sprang free and almost hit her in the face." I really enjoyed Sarah and Keith's adventure.
What do You think about By His Desire (2000)?
Loved this fast mini book! I will be reading Kate Grey's other books as soon as possible.
—elli
this was a good book but i think it should have ended differently!!!
—Tiago
There was very little plot and very unrealistic.
—pocketpamela
