Sigh. Another 50/Bared to You knock off. I'm really sick of reading about 21 year old virgins meeting billionaires who can't get enough of them and are dominants in bed. Doesn't any of this shit happen to say, a 30 year old? Can't we make it a little more realistic? Guess I'm sick of seeing all the 20 year olds get all the sex, someone throw us 30-somethings some love. Sheesh. I know, it's fiction. So what. Anyway, rant over. I don't know if this was an unedited version that I have or what but it was freaking full of typos and wrong words and it was a hot mess. One chapter ended really weirdly and abruptly. It needs some heavy editing work. A decent story but it has been done and done again, and better. Not that this sucked and I liked that he was a dom but not as freaking INSANE as Christian Grey *shudder*. I'm a sucker so I'll probably finish the series but I have read better. 2 1/2-3 stars. After downloading the edited version, I felt the need to re-write my review...having no distractions made all the difference. I actually liked the story line. It may be similar to some of my other favorites in the genre but isn't that what anyone who reads a particular genre is looking for? With that being said, I now have a HUGE crush on Landon. Reading it the second time around was 100% more enjoyable than the first. Can't wait to see what happens next!! Now I'm excited!
What do You think about Consume Me (2000)?
This would be somewhere between 3.5 and 4 stars for me..
—pauld
