What do You think about Darknesses (2004)?
Same criticisms as for #1 - did nobody copy-edit this book???? did nobody EDIT this book AT ALL???Seriously. Cut out about 1/3 of the book - fewer trees get cut down (okay maybe not really), fewer pages, sentences that don't double back on themselves and choke off any sense...it would help keep me committed as a reader. If I put it down once between reading (and I did, because it took me a few days to finish), I had to skim back over everything that came before to figure out what was going on again.Maybe I am just dumb. As before, once I got into it, it was good and I enjoyed it. I just got really thrown by poor editing. I'm also confused about why, at the end, Alucius doesn't dispatch the bravos with Talent, instead of bullets. If it was explained, I missed it. XDThis is not a review. It is a note-to-self.
—Saya