A brilliant short read which keep me laughing and smiling alternately until the end. You've got to love Kyle's unique story telling style - in this case complete with a neurotic think-too-much Whit and his equally funny, lovable hell-did-he-actually-do-that suitor. By the end, I was even wondering what kind of comical life adventures and misadventures the two will go through together. Nice and thank you Kyle. 3.5 stars – Very fun and hilarious short story that has the extra bonus of being free to read online. (And its GR page even has handy e-versions for downloading.)Nerdy Whit is flummoxed when Hot Zack joins his twice-weekly RPG game, but even though he’s too shy to make a move outside the game, he finds himself getting lost in the action while they play (and he secretly loves it when his warrior can rescue Zack’s foul-mouthed female gnome.) Fortunately for Whit, Zack takes matters into his own hands to help move them from table games to something more.The story is a very fun and light read, and I laughed out loud at a few moments, especially with anything that referenced Whit’s many missions to move his relationship with Zack from zero to Awesome. My only lingering question is how Whit got any action prior to Zack since his social anxiety and awkwardness stifled him a lot. But in the end, it’s still a very funny story, so if you’re looking for something short (13,000+ words), sweet, and light, this could fit the bill well. (And it’s free!)
What do You think about Dirty Play (2012)?
I love all of Kyle's Dirty stories and this one is no exception. Great and entertaining read! :)
—naomichanelxo
3.5 stars rounded up for LIAW freebie
—Bloodsuckingfreako1
