I've read several of these shorts and liled them but this one left me cold. I can deal with the lack of a real plot because its a really short erotica..but I didnt find it very erotic. the idea of a woman orgasming just from dirty talk is beyond me and made everything else feel unrealistic. half the book is a description of the husband but all we get about the wife is long blonde hair and a flat stomach (yawn). then after all this buildup the big sex scene is her giving a blowjob...kindve a let down if you ask me A very small glimpse into a shared fantasy between a husband and wife. The erotica seems to wane at the end and almost seems unfinished.We get a build up to the scene the wife craves but then none of her gratification as the act plays out.Sometimes you get porn without plot, and that can be okay, especially in something this short, but this almost seemed like minimal plot without the expected climax.
a very short, very hott read, I was all caught up in the story and forgot it was a short...
—lildonnie
The build up was fantastic, but the ending was both disappointing and anticlimactic .
—shilohE7
Kindle Edition.
—Breanna
REVIEW LATER
—Laura
