This was a short, sweet read. It's written at a fast pace, that was at times a little choppy, but it was a good way to break up my time. It needed a bit more detail though and maybe a few changes to the word "God". It felt like that was repeated nearly every time a character spoke. For a freebie it was OK, there's not a lot you can say about this many pages. I would have liked it to be longer rather than in parts as seemed interesting but I'm not paying for 22 page books in a series. Okay phrases such as They were going to have sexual intercourse should not be in a erotic novella. Okay first and foremost this story was funny because the sexual descriptions were so horrible. For real, if any of that stuff was really said during sex for the first time I would probably run like hell. For Real. While the story could have been good I think that it lost me because half the time I really just wanted to laugh.
Could have been better, really good beginning but they declare their love for each other too soon.
—dvk
I liked this short read about how Holly and Ethan meet.
—AndersH
Too quick & short...it was ok.
—joshmoneyzzz
No comment....
—Sam
