What do You think about First Thing I See (2000)?
3.5 stars...The plot was good. But it wasn't really a great one. Very much predictable. The writing was ok.But the author could have been more descriptive and elaborate. Like... she could have mentioned her father's marriage in the beginning itself. Something about her history to let us readers get to know more about her.Their dialogues was written as if they are having a discussion about business. "I want to make you cum"- Kennedy"Ok" - Hope. I felt half of the dialogues was just like this. She didn't even argue with him but let him do whatever he wanted. I felt she didn't have a backbone to stand up for herself. Lol. I didn't feel anything going on between the characters. Everything felt like a business arrangement. But later, I guess after 35-40%, I started to love this book. The story was taking an interesting turn (still predictable though) and the development in characters was evident. It took some time for me to like the protagonists. And I loved the ending part. So, 3.5 stars it is.
—Milary
Ok where do I start...let me just say that I really enjoyed this book to me it was a sweet story but I just felt like the ending wasn't the ending there were so many questions that would have been nice if it was followed up on just 1 example is the evil step mom situation and if her dad ever sees how she talks to her...like I said I enjoyed the storyline everything was nice simple and sweet but the ending felt lacking and I needed more...Maybe a fallow up book because I just feel like it was incomplete...
—CoachE
Hmm? I have to say, the ending is rushed but it was a good read overall
—Calibur
All i can say is...amazing!
—sanjayapalo
