Hey, There's Fur In My Wedding Cake (2011) - Plot & Excerpts
Seemed way too short but I can live with that since we get more of the story in a later book. But the editing...OMG! At least twice a name was wrong, extra words added(or not taken out I should say), some words in the wrong tense(-es instead of -ed or just plain missing that sort of thing when it needed it). Most of time I don't worry about an editing error or two(especially since that is more a publisher responsibility) but this one had enough that it bugged me and I actually had to reread a couple sentences just to get the context right. Kind of throws you out of a story. I have yet to read the full-novel sequel to this. It is on my to-read list and this free short just makes me want to immediately pick up Hecht's work. It is nice to know where the two men started as I am addicted to meetings between the love interests. It makes a story interesting to me and I must admit, this meeting is unique. The scene is truly different to me and though the banter may be more standard betwen the two destined characters that the audience will know will end up together, that knowing adds something. I think my only wish would be that the ending had a bit more substance; however, it was exceptional for a prequel novella. If you are interested in Stephani, you should read this as it gives a glimpse of her and a platform for a work of her. It is free so no harm done, right?
What do You think about Hey, There's Fur In My Wedding Cake (2011)?
Really hope for a sequel! The start of something interesting!I always loved bad guy.
—socialrejectz
Very nice tease prelude to the book hope their story's out soon
—britnee
