Read this earlier today.. It is erotica so if that is not your thing I would suggest that you not read the story. It is essentially about a woman who is an Executive in a corporate setting always in control, who allows herself to be controlled sexually. What you do not know until the end is that she paid for the session and it was not forced as the story makes it appear. I read this in ebook form so I can not tell you how long the book in page form, but the story was very short and left a lot to be desired. I do believe if she would lengthen the story it would be a great read. It says a lot when you cannot even finish a short story, especially an erotic one. I didn't find it interesting enough to continue. It was very boring. The voice was loose and even though this is a short, a reader has to be able to connect with at least one character to care about finishing the story. I found nothing at all original about the scene, in fact the sex sounded like something that had been copied out of Basic Instinct. I think the author tried too hard to be "unique" with this but it turns out being over the top and tedious. The dialogue was laughable, corny and it made the sex scenes humorous other than erotic.
What do You think about His Voice, His Command (2009)?
