The characters don't work for me.One seems immature, petty and entitled while the other is a robotic saint he's so good and responsible for so much so young.The mother runs a big sucessful buisness and yet is protrayed as niave and incapable - her son wants the family buisness to fail so he can do his own thing? That feels obnoxious and hardly the best buisness strategy.Couldn't get into it at all so not rating. Another great story from the LHNB event, that you Liz!I loved the broken MC characterization she did with Jordy, how finding a partner who understands where he is coming from frightens him, how he has to learn to share his demons and have someone beside him that will be patient and understanding.And Ken, a boy who had to turn into a man far too soon due to some tragic events in his past. He is the perfect partner for Jordy, a young man who knows how important trust is, and can give Jordy all the time and space he needs until he finds himself and is able to open up and love.The picture prompt is beautiful.
What do You think about Merger Of Equals (2013)?
enjoyable, but too many open storylines to make for a 3 star read
—tamburin
What a great free story this was, I highly recommend this one .
—zuzi
A perfect little gem of a story, just the right length.
—ono
