Let me tell you what I would do: After getting over my initial shock of my ordeal, I'd first find out if my rescuer was intellectually impaired because seriously no normal, intelligent (or even medium intelligence)person would sit outside in his truck waiting for 2 known suspicious characters to 'finish' what they were up to, knowing that they kidnapped a young pretty woman and brought her to their house. Surely an intelligent person, if he was too scared to go in by himself, would speed off to the nearest police station and get help! If for some reason, every police person was unavailable, then by all means tell the postman, the milkman, the bartender, the barber even the bloody housewives association but tell somebody and get everyone together and ram the door in. If for some illogical reason you were wrong in your assumption that they were up to no good and they actually only kidnapped her because they wanted to learn their ABC's and wanted to force her to tutor them, then apologise and offer to pay for the damages to the door but honey don't sit in your car and wait for them to 'finish' so that you can then rescue the poor woman! Anyway, once I determined that my 'saviour' was not intellectually impaired, I would seriously kick his behind for taking so long to rescue me. I certainly wouldn't start finding him attractive and then end up sleeping with him for sure! After reading this I could not bring myself to think of him as a hero let alone an alpha male. Ok I love books and I love to read and I truly hate to give books such low rating but for me this was unavoidable. This book is 100% unbelievable and not in the good way lol. Seriously I did so many eye rolls while reading this I think I may have pull something. **** spoiler Alert *****reason why this book is unbelievable which ruins the whole point. 1). the book starts with a character Cassie who is kidnapped and in very very very vivid detail repeatedly raped. BUT she miraculously is rescued by the hunky rich boy Jesse. Okay not to bad, can be believable. This is where it turns. After getting Cassie to the hospital he stays right by her side and makes arrangements to take her to his "safe" house and guess what she goes... yeap someone she has never meet and after just getting beaten and raped just decides to run off with him to a supposed safe house. BUT wait it gets worse!! Within like a week or so after getting raped (which fact you sound know she was a virgin before getting raped) has sex with Jesse.Okay to me this is the biggest mistake the author ever freaking made. Obviously she did NO research into rape victims. because first off if you are brutally raped there is always tearing and other damage that cause very severe pain. and in the book when the first guy raped cassie the author states there is blood on his penis. So obviously there was damage. So I highly doubt for any reason a rape victim would want to have sex that soon after. Plus ALL the sudden she goes from hating sex to loving it. Yeah mentally that aint gonna happen. Again in the novel she is constantly contradicting herself. Specifically when Cassie is in one scene slammed head first into a wall she goes to the hospital where Jesse tells Cassie when she wakes she has a small concussion, but the very next page the doctor tells her you can go home since there is no concussion. So hopefully you can see how one might be a bit confused. Plus most people know doctors say with a concussion you really should sleep much and that it should be monitored all that but Cassie just sleeps and sleep and sleeps. the other medical issue is Cassie hers a pop and just knows the bad guy has pulled her shoulder out of socket which means it was dislocated. BUT not once do they relocate it the paramedic puts it in a sling, yeah that not gonna do much until you get it back in its socket and then have scans done to see if any muscles and ligaments have been torn. I know some might over look this but if your gonna write a book that has the main character going through so many health issues you might wanna do a tad bit of medical research even if you just web md it!2). the whole pace of the relationship. I mean I have read many books about soulmates and love at first site and all that blah blah blah, but this one Jesse is calling Cassie "baby" and "honey" with in hours of knowing her. then you have in less than a year really like 7 months her getting kidnapped, raped, rescued, then knocked up, then married. 3). the plot: there should have way more detail in both characters past since they both have major life changing events that have happened and that would have helped the reader connect to the characters more. then at the end and I mean end like the last 20 pages there all the sudden is a crazy ex-fiancé that pushes Cassie down the stairs trying to kill her! That was so freaking pointless. That should have been saved for a second book instead of the author starting over with a different story with new main characters for part 2. Then the ending itself was so freaking anticlimactic like the author herself was done with the story and just wanted to give the readers a wedding scene. On a positive note the book is short less than 300 pages and I read it in a day, but do some eye stretches before reading cause there is going to be some major eye rolls ahead!
What do You think about My Savior Forever (2013)?
Plot was a little slow and the story & characters were unrealistic. The writing was also sub-par.
—Eguonorrr
4.5 warning...some rape scenes but written well. Wonderful Love Story and Happily Ever After
—garch
0 StarsI really didn't like this one...at all.
—Psycho224
Sad beginning...happy ending...I loved it!!!
—Mogombo
