"I should lay off the pizza," I thought as the world fuzzed grey. "What was that?" Buck asked. I couldn't answer him. I couldn't breathe, let alone form words. "Vic? Victoria?" I heard someone yelling from a distance, and then there was a thundering, like a stampede coming toward me. I wanted to roll out of its way, but I couldn't move. "What's happening?" This time Buck was panicked. The grey fuzzies lightened a bit, and the world came back into shadowy focus. I could see Buck, arms outstretched fumbling around. Thankfully Martin was nowhere to be seen. I started to shiver uncontrollably. I probably looked like I was having some sort of seizure by the time Smoke reached me. Dropping to his knees, he knelt over me so that he could look at my eyes through my goggles. "Victoria? Victoria can you hear me?" "I…I'm okay," I told him breathlessly through teeth chattering like falling dominoes.
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