I downloaded the book for free from Amazon, so considering the price, it wasn't a bad deal.But...The story feels rushed, and some key plot line elements and/or story details seem to be missing. Like midway through, Steven is in New York, headed to the gym, and suddenly, he's in Minnesota. How does that happen?While the romance between Steven and Emily is "nice," I don't feel a strong connection with either character, making it difficult to root for the couple to get together. The story could definitely use a dose of sexual tension, like a Shannon Butcher-style romantic thriller! Create the tension for the get-go and hook the reader!!Finally, the story wrapped up a bit too neatly. I knew the connection with Vincent right away, but again, it just seemed to wrap up neatly with a bow on it too soon!It is a quick read! I finished it in a couple hours. Not What She Seems By Victorine E. LieskeThis exciting story of a woman on the run from her terrible abusive past will have you on the edge of your seat. Emily Grant and her four year old son, Connor, are trying their best to keep the past behind them. She is currently on the run until she meets a wonderful, handsome, caring, man named Ethan, actually the billionaire Steven Ashton, and she begins to fall in love. When she realizes who he really is she devises a plan to get money from him so she can disappear for good. But things don’t turn out the way they are planned. Steven refuses to let her get away once he starts to piece things together, he is determined to do whatever it takes to help Emily and Connor so they can live a normal life. The story has many twists and turns, giving you the opportunity to guess where it’s going to go next and surprising you with every page turn. The chapters are short, making it an easy read. I really enjoyed reading this book and trying to come to my own conclusion using the clues given before the author reveals the truth. The story is very well written and the descriptions are amazing keeping you in the story and helping you connect with each character. If you love plot twists and excitement this is a great book for you. Jessica Bowersariesgrlreview.comThis ebook was free for Kindle on Amazon.com
What do You think about Not What She Seems (2010)?
I liked this. Had some twists and turns. Clean and fun.
—herraodong
A really nice one.Kept me in suspense. Shocker ending.
—Dot
