Outside The Lines:: Third Person Narration - Plot & Excerpts
Johnny pulled one off too, with exactly the right amount of force. “What am I looking for?” he asked. She blinked in surprise. “What?” “What’s got you all hot and bothered?” He had one hand on the file, his gaze on his computer screen as he tapped away at the keys. “What’s funny? What are we looking for?” Her heart bounced upward like a wave had come along. “You think something might be off, too? You believe me?” She wasn’t used to being believed. Which was understandable. She’d gotten used to it. It had nothing to do with her abilities; she was one of the best, even if no one knew it yet. No, it had more to do with the time she’d spent locked up as a youth. Those things tended to stick with a person. Sometimes on their record. For a second, Johnny hesitated. Then his gaze slid to mine. “I think you’re nuts, Jauntie. All I want to do is get this over with. If I help, we get done sooner.” Her lifted heart fell with a bang. Of course. Never attribute anything hopeful or nice or human to Johnny Danger, or your heart would get broken.
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