This was a very short novella but I knew that going in. It was all I wanted out of this. Erotic steam of a fun scene. As along as I kept my mind off the fact these were almost children going at it and picturing them as twenty something adults, it worked and I enjoyed it. The scene was sexy. As it's intended. It's illicit as was intended... and I really enjoyed the quick burst of dampening it produced. Bravo! I actually don't know what to call this. It's not a short story, or is it? How short can a short story be before it's just a snippet? Can't be a novella definitely not a full length... So I'm confused that this teaser ( truly no pun intended) didn't quite tease me to the full extent and I think it's because right when it should have taken off it flat-lined. This is like an excuse for bad sex. The climax came too quickly.
If you looking for a hot 10 minute read this is it.
—glover123
That was entirely too short...I need more!!!
—karebear
Clearly enjoy it wish it was longer
—Brit
short. but pretty good.
—sgma
cute but way to short
—williamsc7
