Wow! Wow!Wow! Five star plus and why haven't I found Dominiques books sooner? I adored this quirky novella. It had everything I love in a m/m story. I laughed at the snarky humour, which is my favourite type, cringed at how bad tempered Jared was but at the same time secretly fell for him because he's so irascible, became hooked on Kyle from the moment he back chatted Old Grumpy pants Jared and cheered Vanessa ( Jareds cheeky secretary ) every time she totally ignored her ratty boss and just did what she thought best and thank god she did! Delightful, delicious and delectable... With some of the best drawn out sexual tension Ive come across in any romance which lead to a real sizzling love scene that left me tingling. Fab-U-lous! I have just read all her books back to back but ended up doing it back to front so even though this is her debut novella, I've actually read this last of all. Each one a five star rating for me so Ms Frost gets a hat trick. If you haven't read her yet then rectify that straight away. I love her style! Reccomend her books highly. I'm really disappointed in Loose ID for publishing this. This is repurposed fanfiction from Teen Wolf and not very good repurposed fanfic at that. The story develops way too quickly, important background information is glossed over to the point that Jared (formerly Derek Hale) is unlikable rather than understandably conflicted. It works as fanfic because people seeking out Derek Hale/Stiles Stilinski fanfic know what Derek Hale has been through and why Stiles might be attracted to him. In this case, however, more time should've been spent filing off the serial numbers to build up the background behind the characters to explain why they work together. As it reads for original fiction, Jared is gruff and abrupt for no reason and Kyle's impishness reads as over the top rather than an established character trait built up over multiple episodes. I understand from the author's fan tumblr that she plans on pulling more of her fanfic to publish. I hope she spends more time on character background.
