The Initiation Of Ms. Holly (2014) - Plot & Excerpts
I'm still not sure exactly what I thought about this book. I'm a fan of erotica and have read pretty much every scenario under the sun and I don't consider myself a prude, but when you bring in all the multiple partners and jumping from partner to partner and still want it to be a love story, I have some issues. Call it conservatism, call it whatever, but my mind just won't wrap around those types of situations. While the description of the book touts that this is a love story, the majority of this book is the sex and it is very well written and very, very hot. Like off the Richter scale hot. The whole scene on the motorcycle was probably one of the hottest I have ever read and will admit I even went back at the end and read it over again. Just to make sure of course, that it really was that good. Rita's first encounter with Edward on the train isn't as good as I thought it would be and after that one encounter, I believed that she would accept a dinner invitation, but then to just jump into the whole initiation to be a member of The Mount without every learning what Edward looks like, who he is, or what The Mount is was unbelievable to me. Perhaps if Rita's character was explained more, like her past sexual history where we learned she was up for anything even with women, because her first interaction with a woman sexually in this book has no hesitancy what so ever, then maybe I could have believed her character more. At times when she was having sex with all the different characters, it was more about the physical and her mind wasn't even engaged. I found that I was uncomfortable sometimes because it felt like she had to distance herself from the situation in order to get through it. Not that she ever felt uncomfortable, but it made me wonder because we weren't given that glimpse into her mind. Also, her immediate feelings for Edward after 2 meetings without ever learning anything about him except that they have awesome sex, was too quick. I'm all for love at first sight, but usually we get some background first or the characters get to know each other, but there was nothing like that in this book. Ad a debut, not bad, but I needed more background and a better understanding of the characters to accept the situations. What a great way to have sex on a train with a total stranger. Who not only temps you after into playing more of his games of sexual awearness with more fun to be had.Come and follow Rita & Edward and his friends on their sexual journey with each other and the partners they meet along the way. This is the first book of the series to come I can't wait for the other books to come out I will be there waiting. This book got me from the start hated putting it down. Plus hated when it ended.I hope you enjoy it as much as I did.
What do You think about The Initiation Of Ms. Holly (2014)?
realise now that I read this a while back - very good book
—lilsawty
