I really didn't know what to expect when I started reading this book. But once I got into it, I really enjoyed it. I felt sorry for Gab. because he doesn't know anything but the inside of his ivory walls. Glad he has a friend, just like himself. I wanted more; I didn't want it to end so quickly. Author needs to write a sequel to this to keep us up to date on Gab's progress. Thanks for writing... I.c. Hearts Okay, so I requested the changling story, and I may be biased in my rating, but that story is seriously NOT finished. I want so much more than that! =)Gabe knows he is an experiment of some kind. He's never seen the outside of this room. They come in, make him drink things, perform all kinds of tests on him, but he has no idea what they want. He finds out he's not alone, but he also discovers that if the men make you leave the room, you'll never come back from it. He knows he's a failure, and it's only a matter of time...And then someone new comes in and takes over. And she brings Lukas with her. Lukas is a light in the dark for Gabe. Lukas shows him the outside world for the first time. And Lukas is also an experiment; he's the same as Gabe, only better. There are more tests, but Gabe is still a failure, and time runs out when the brass finally shows up demanding results Gabe can't produce.This was everything I could have hoped for with the prompt I posted for the Love is Always Write event, except for full length novel. There is so much more to this story. I need to know what happens next!! =)
What do You think about The Ivory Prison (2012)?
Really good short story. Looking forward to reading a full novel!
—emmeebear101
This one has to be made in to a book! What a great teaser....
—shauna
I loved it, couldn't stop had me hooked from the first line.
—bob
