It's not a bad story per se. But it's so ridiculously underdeveloped and simply written, with a plot that is just the bare bones of the first chapter of a children's book and character depth and relationship development equivalent to those of a cardboard cutout of Brangelina, that it had me dragging myself all the way through it just because I only had 10... 5... 2 pages left.Also: brocest - thumbs up; gymnastics - thumbs down. LHNB Story released 3.8.13The two MCs in this short story are brothers - which I know will automatically hit some peoples "no way" buttons when it comes to reading it. The younger brother and talented gymnast, Ryan, narrates the story of how his older brother, Tyler, has always looked after him, from rescuing him from their abusive father, through foster care, and then looking after him. Ryan has felt more than brotherly love for Tyler for several years, of which Tyler is aware but has never encouraged him but when Ryan is involved in an accident the relationship between them changes. This is is a well written story with an up in the air ending as it finishes at the potential start of a more than just brothers relationship between the two MCs.
What do You think about The Meet (2013)?
Thank you William Cooper for donating your story, your time and your talent.
—sarah
It was a sweet story but I found the incest just a bit squimy.
—megsyeager
I totally agree with Julesmarie's review. Said it all.
—JStrom
