This is very short and I thought it was missing character development. It didn't make me feel anything for the characters and I think even if a story is short, it needs that aspect. I have to say, the fact that the characters are Christmas elves is a little disturbing (just a little) after all like my mom says everybody knows elves are born in cabbage leaves and so do not have sex... I liked the Christmas theme though, I am really having a hard time getting in the Christmas spirit this year and this helped a little. I enjoyed this story a lot. Following Christian, an Elf in almost constant trouble, to see him find his destiny in an unexpected way was great fun. Pairing him up with the somewhat stern Head Elf, Gabriel, provided a few good laughs as well as some very hot action between the sheets – and elsewhere.Christian is a bit of a klutz, and constantly gets into trouble; dressing and behaving as behooves a Christmas Elf all the time just isn’t his thing. He also has a heart of gold though, and half the problems happen because he's trying to be nice. With a hopeless crush on his best friend smashed when the man announces he is serious about a girl, Christian really has nothing left to hope for and is about to resign.Gabriel may seem all harsh and stern, but he's hiding his own little infatuation with Christian. Probably overcompensating, to ensure his preferences don’t show. As the Head Elf, he is all about keeping things orderly, well organized, and everyone following procedure. And when he sets out to achieve a goal, say, seduce a certain little elf, he doesn't do anything by halves! This is an angst-free story with lots of slightly different Christmas spirit. I can recommend it to anyone who has ever wondered what those Elves are up to on long, cold winter evenings at the North Pole.
What do You think about The Naughty Ones (2010)?
*downloaded free on ARE3.5 Stars rounded upVery cute short holiday story.
—minnow123
it was a very cute (and hot) Xmas short story.
—lollypop
