First, the up front: This is very short story, about 20 pages, and there are no sex scenes. There you go. Now you can prepare your mind to enjoy the story without wondering, "Hey! Where's the sex?!" I thought this was a sweet story, and would love to see it as more of a full length novel. in fact, the ending is damn near perfect...we just need everything that came before it! =D Get writing, Drew! We want to see all two weeks of that Florida bus tour! I'd probably give this story 2.5 stars if it were an option, although the 2 star "it was okay" description fits.The writing wasn't bad. It wasn't great, but it wasn't impossible. The premise was cute and I liked his "adventures" on the bus and seeing the people he met. Parts of it dragged...I liked the priest part, but started skimming after awhile because it didn't feel like it was going anywhere. It annoyed me a little that he never called his mum, even though she was practically the only family he had and she was supposed to pick him up at the airport. I suppose in a era of pay phones, calling home isn't as easy though, especially across the pond.I never really feel a connection between Will and Graham, but it's hard since they get so little screen time together. I'm not really sure if that's what this story is about anyway. We're supposed to take the "I love you" for granted and just enjoy the journey.
What do You think about The Way To Will (2010)?
Awkward writing that surprisingly got better during the 24 pages.Very cute roadtrip story.
—pooh
A short, very sweet tale of a vacation fling worth chasing.
—jemmy
