Didn't love this story. It felt so unnaturally drawn out. While I was reading it, I felt like I understood the characters and the reason for their separation. But after I finished the book, all I could think was "there's an afternoon I'll never get back." I don't think Sarah deserves Adam. I understand she has pain in her past, but we all do. What killed me was her ridiculous overreaction to his proposal. If you've been with someone for 18 months, you even live together, and your first reaction to the next step on the road of life together is to completely shut down, break things off, and give zero explanation for your actions? Moving in didn't trigger that response? Being intimate didn't either? Oh, and to later tell him you're pregnant, but terminating the pregnancy and you don't want his opinion. Expect to have your journals read as your live-in ex tries to figure out the mixed signals you continue to send his way.The only reason I'm giving two stars is because I really did like Adam's character. I sympathized with him and wanted him to be happy. I had a hard time pulling for their relationship to work out. If I were one of his friends in the story, I probably would have strongly encouraged him to move on, especially if Sarah had terminated the pregnancy. Maybe even if she hadn't. (I'm not advocating abandoning a child, EVER -especially considering my father abandoned me and my siblings- but Sarah was that off-putting. In fictional character land, I would easily have told Adam to cut his losses.) This is book is just superb! It really piqued my interest and i just can't stop reading it :) tho it's too late for me to read the whole book and only till chap11, i say that it was worth reading and that I really do need more. AAAAHHHH!!!!! i just love love love ur story xx A really huge congrats for publishing this lovely book.. Ps. Adam is one hell of a gorg guy XD@Purrypurr in wattpad here!:)
What do You think about Together Apart (2014)?
Predictable plot. I was not happy with either characters development. Ending abrupt and cliche.
—BriiLesniak
A sad sorry but it keeps you wanting to know the secrets that lie within the plot.
—Roxanna
Emotional page-turner. Definitely worth the read.
—ald
A compelling story that had me gripped to the end
—ferris
