My initial reaction on reading was that it was intriguing, different, fast paced and very well plotted. I really fell for George and was intrigued by Jeffrey. I wanted George to prevail, somehow and I could hardly wait to see how the author was going to finish the story. In the end she didn't disappoint.Looking back on the story some time after the first read, having found fan fiction by the author I've enjoyed more than this and after having found more original fiction, I would still say that this is a well written story. It's perhaps over long, occasionally repetitive and violent and the sex scenes tend to go on a bit, but it remains original and worth reading. At first I loved it but I suppose it just turned out to be not my thing towards mid-way. I stopped reading it and eventually lost complete interest in it. It's written well, and many others like it, but I wouldn't try to reread it.From what I recall there was too much sex, and it felt like the author kind of threw in the best-friend romance too suddenly; I had no inkling there was even any kinds of feelings before. I felt like there should've been more development or hints before because it made me feel like the author was just trying to throw in more sex in the mix, by adding it.
What do You think about Undesirable (2010)?
From the very short part I read there are non-con, m/f scenes and menage (including a menage HEA).
—Lou
You'll only like this if you're into slash fiction :3.
—jay
