This obviously didn't work for me.Even pretending the MCs are not related and this being Daddy/boy kink it was unerotic and not really sexy for me. The potty language/vulgar language is always a firm turn-off for me anyway. Looking at it as incest erotica it didn't work either. There was no true sense of connection, no sense of transgression, and the character's musings were those of a child prior to puberty rather than one with a fully developed sexuality. This in combination with erotica is wrong on too many levels to be anything but terminally squicky for me. Wow. Just...wow. Holy hot, forbidden, twisted, psychological mind fucked, sad, torturous, way too short, gripping little quickie.I'm not totally sure how I feel about how I feel after reading this. :DExcept for learning the abuse started early on, I kept hoping for a twist at the end about them just having a Daddy kink thing going. Such was not to be though. So yes, I wanted this to be longer, wanted to know more about this entire situation, even though I'm not entirely sure I could handle it.
What do You think about Daddy (2013)?
A vignette with little development of either character and it's extremely short.
—renee
