This book gets 2 stars because:1. I liked the author weaving between the past to the present and male and female perspective. However, after a while, I got really really really tired of it. (The fact that I started off really loving the weaving is the reason for 2nd star)2. The dialogue was not realistic enough. It felt fake because of which I was unable to connect to the characters. You will fall in love with Jax and Drew, the Dean brothers. They have a great relationship and are so interesting. Mckenzie, who is the main female, has had a rough go at relationships. I truely love the characters, they are all unique and great to read about.But, I will say I think we are a bit short on the emotional side of things. I think the self doubt from Mackenzie was a bit rough to relate to in the beginning of the story.However, towards the end, I felt like I connected a bit more with her and the situation. That being said I feel like she is very quick to get overly upset and even quicker to get over those emotional situations. I don't think Drew's big secret was cause for as big of an upset as it turned out to be, now with Jax's statements that were beingthrown out. This woman Vicki who we get to know more as the book continued, also has a quick about face in her emotions that I didn't think was very fitting for the way she had been most of the book.I loved Mackenzie's ladies. They were entertaining and I wish to see more of them.The sexy scenes seemed a bit fumbled, but that could just be that I want description and naughty as can be. They weren't completely horrible though.All in all I think this was a 3.5 star book. I felt there could have been more development and some rewording to help flow in some parts, but all in all, it was a fairly good read. I would consider reading another book by the author to watch as her writing skills grow because there is most definitely promise there.
What do You think about Ending A Broken Journey (2013)?
Got a date! *woot*3rd Aug 2013!~No hint also of a release date. :(
—peterrjezler
A really sweet and touching book. A definite book to recommend.
—hebrotherton
