Every Last Kiss, Final Copy, June 30, 2011 - Plot & Excerpts
Right now, however, they were perfectly intact…and very, very dark. Cleopatra and I stared down the empty, darkened hallway that led to the Serapis temple, both of us thoroughly creeped out by the scurrying noises emitting from the corridor. I felt fairly certain that there were even nastier creatures than rats and mice down here, but I wasn’t going to think of them…the kind of creatures with stingers on the ends of their curled tails or the huge, unhinged mouths with fangs. I shuddered. Cleopatra lifted down a torch from the wall and lit it. “Are you ready?” she asked, turning to me with a grimace. She wasn’t any more excited than I was to be doing this. But it couldn’t be helped. We couldn’t be seen, so this was the only way. I nodded reluctantly and grasped her arm as we started walking. We had worn sandals for this venture and I was now so very glad that we did. As we walked, I could hear the continual scurrying of animals that lived in the dark… and I was extremely glad that my bare feet weren’t going to bump into them.
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