Actually the idea is quite good but the writing isnt that good. At least conversational flow is okay. This could be good if only the story not too shallow executed. And the hero (Nik), well how should i put it, he just didnt act or react as normally should be. In the middle of the story i even think that Jesse (his best friend) is who the Heroine wil ended up with haha. Anyway its a good and entertaining short story Well. This was okay. The beginning was interesting with Ember as a 7 year old and showing how her life was with her mother. It was also nice to see how the four guys used to take care of her. After this, it was just...meh.I don't really like how the story panned out, to be honest. Ember was kind of annoying and I didn't really come to care for her. The guys were alright, but there wasn't much to get to know about them.The big revelation was also kind of dumb, like I can't believe they didn't all figure it out sooner and after than it just kind of went down. I just wasn't feeling it. There were still some parts that were alright, though.
What do You think about In Den Armen Des Rockers (2014)?
Short and a bit rushed but overall a very enjoyable quick read.
—shinling
really really really good but way to short for my taste
—nance