well the writing was surprisingly good for the type of book and the sex scene was pretty hot. but the whole supernatural twist came out of nowhere and was completely unnecesary. would've given it more stars if it had been just a straight erotica without the supernatural. also the who,e we had sex now let's be together forever detracted from my enjoyment. I know its a short so there's not much room for romance development but still jumping from total strangers to let's spend eternity together in a span of twenty pages is a bit much...I dont think there's any sex that good lol It actually is just an orgy. This could've been the opening to a longer piece but instead it's just about 10minutes worth of sex. If the author hadn't felt the need to add the useless "twist" at the end, I would've given it two stars. This story is something I'd expect to read on Nifty.org, not in a published piece. Also, unprotected sex with a strange is dumb in M/M it's even stupider in M/F. Has the author never heard of STDs or pregnancies? Also, having sex once does not mean you're going to fall in love for eternity. Unless you're a 14 year old virgin.Don't read it unless you're looking for some word porn.
What do You think about Not Just An Orgy (2009)?
3 1/2 stars Good Short Read!! Small surprise ending!!:)
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