This felt trite. And... Ugh. There are so many things about how the hero and heroine behaved and treated each other that I'm not okay with. This need to decide for each other and punish each other... :(This also needed some edits. This author's earlier works are too often full of comma splices. Semi colons and conjunctions are fabulous things. As are well appointed periods. Between the grammar, the surface level writing and the actual plot, I was supremely disappointed in this. What I really enjoy about Lauren Dane's writing is that she can flesh out supporting characters and a small town like more "chick lit" or classic contemporary romance authors (Higgins, Dahl, SE Philips), but still write excellent sex scenes between two (or more!) intelligent, encouraging, self-knowledgeable, and caring partners. She's just a delight to read and a great step up in quality for those who liked Fifty Shades and want more erotica.
What do You think about Sweet Charity (2008)?
Enjoyable read, but I kept getting Deja vu. I think I've read this before. LOL.
—Sue
I have one complaint Mrs. Dane, and that's that this was only a novella!
—tim