I picked up this short story for free and read it after reading Fired Up. It's about Fallon Jones the psychic detective of Jones and Jones, and in it he has been requested by the owner of a book store to investigate the weird sensations he is feeling there. The previous owner had mysteriously disappeared after selling the business, and Fallon does feel that something is a little off in the store. Apparently, however, the current owner also has an ulterior motive for asking him to investigate the store. Nice quick read with an excerpt from another book about Fallon Jones, which looks good. 語り口はFallon Jonesの一人称で珍しい。事件もおもしろいが...。第１に、業務日誌にしては文が砕けすぎ、私的なメモにしては最後が長すぎる。Fallonは事実一辺倒な文を書きそうだよね。「作中メモ」にとどめておくか、もしくは冒頭のあれが余計なことだったのだ。第２に、以前に別の本でFallonに会ったことがないと、彼の特殊な一人合点について行けないかもしれない。第３に、残念ながらロマンスが欠片もない。"In Too Deep"の直前だからだ。間違いなく、そちらを先に読んだほうが良い。でもこれはツイッター小説であることを考えると、なかなかスゴイのだ。ああ、リアルタイムで楽しみたかった！さぞ楽しかったろう！
This e-book was a very interesting read. Definitely enjoyed it!!
—becauseiam
A quick read is about all it has going for it.
—uno
Not much to it; quick read but no substance.
—james
Amazon Kindle freebie
—reedagolden
good series.
—Zeb
