Read This Love Of Mine (2013)

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Author

Amanda Bennett

Genre

Romance

Series

Raine

Rating

3.9 of 5 Votes: 3

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Language

English

Publisher

Self Published

Shops

Amazon.com, Barnes & Noble

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This Love Of Mine (2013) - Plot & Excerpts

This book is horrible, it was seriously torture to read. There are so many hole in the plot it makes Swiss cheese look whole. The characters are annoying, shallow and unbelievable. A lot more work needed to go into character development. Additionally the timeline of the book makes no sense, and there are so many inconsistencies it makes it confusing as well. I've read other books by the author and enjoyed them, this one not so much. I am not quite sure where to start. The book was very rushed and only spans the space of a few days. There are all sorts of error in grammar, spelling and punctuation. The most annoying errors however, were the ones within the storyline. The time line is all screwy (which I would think should be impossible given the fact that this is all over 2-3 days). The motivation for nearly any action taken in this book by any character is nonexistant. Take a moment to let that sink in. I have never once read a book where everything that occurred made me think 'huh? wtf?' and that is how I felt this whole book. It was a free book but I am still regretting reading it.