Undone: A Dystopian Fiction Novel - Plot & Excerpts
He carried a hatchet, which was the first thing I noticed in the dim light of the single candle. He looked surprised when he rushed in, but responded much faster than I anticipated. He shouted, automatically ducking, as Rick swung the baseball bat. It missed him, but struck the person behind him. Lawrence lunged at the hatchet before he could take a hit at Rick, and they fell tumbling back out the smashed backdoor. They hit the ground hard, right by the guy who had gotten hit with the back. They struggled with the hatchet for a few moments, but Lawrence managed to get in a strong punch. Rick and I ran forward into the cold, tripping over the fallen bodies, and began swinging at anything that moved. I felt my hammer come in contact with human heads and arms, and ignored the sickening feeling the cracking and bumping sound provoked in me. I had no idea how many people there were. I didn’t take the time to let my eyes adjust to the darkness. There was a flashlight, but whoever held it was flailing around.
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