Not enough substance and what there was was rushed, these two characters didn't gel for me. There's no depth at all to this story. It was hot when he was watching her but other than that it was a bit blah.It wasn't written well enough to be erotic, it was just a quick, smutty read. I'm not convinced that it's helpful to have your 'friends' rate your book a five star read when it clearly isn’t. Fortunately sense prevailed in the ratings once it had been out for a while. Its always hard to rate a book when you feel like you need more.That is the thing with short stories there never seems to be enough to get you invested.When the story is hot its hot.The scenes with him watching her were great and the hotel scene could have been really hot, but felt a little rushed to me.I wanted more interaction more feelings.I think if your going to go short then it needs to start out with a bang.When the book makes you tingle you tingle but i wanted more of them finding themselves.
This was a great book. it's a quick read and worth it. It's Hot and sexy.
—LadiesMan217
Not bad, kinda hot but too short & not enough development.
—Brian
Super fast read. Entertaining enough and no drama.
—Girly
Quick, sexy read.
—Lizzie82
Hot as hell!
—Nao
