Overall this is a very good story. The characters are lovable and fairly well developed throughout the story. The biggest issue is the grammar/spelling errors and possibly the two main female characters names being flipped a few times. This could be due to me reading it on iBooks and may be an error on their end. It's a pretty good read if you can just get lost in the story and ignore some of the grammar and spelling issues. This manuscript (it doesn't read like an actual revised and edited book) seemed very amateurishly written to me. There were MANY sentences that sounded like those I often encountered in my 7th grade students' writing. (Examples: "Was he that serious of a person that...", "...but he couldn't control showing his emotions", "She recalled all the years it had been only her and him." "...she was trapped in his eyes, and she felt like her feet were glued to the floor." In addition to being filled with spelling, punctuation, and usage errors; the plot was limp, unlikely, and transparent. I read exactly 50% of the book before I gave up on it.
What do You think about Finding Pride (2014)?
I love this book. Just something about it caught me up in it.
—jujubean90
The story was ok, but the editing wasn't so great.
—Bman
Good book! Didn't want their story to end!
—leanne
