I love Angels, and the premise was promising, however, I didn't enjoy this book... The narrative suffered from short sentences, and the dialogue was stiff, awkward and cliche in places. I really wish I could have loved this book. Micah just didn't sound or act like a grown man, and Noah didn't speak or act like a celestial being which was a disappointment and kept me from being invested in these two characters. Not a particularly earth-shattering story. In fact, the ideas have been done before. Or rather, I've read another story with pretty much the exact same resolution to the premise and such (but I read that one first, so this one will just have to suffer, to quote Simon aka Templar of M. Chandler). In fact, this one, seemed to eschew any other parts in favor of the sex, which, to me, still seemed random as fuck (ahahaha. that was actually originally unintended, if you can believe that).I mean, it wasn't bad, I guess. It was, eponymously, sweet. Very, very sweet. Enough sugar to stand your spoon up in, if this were a tea cup. Or those chocolate "all-American" cakes that are basically just really sweet cakes that'll probably kill you if you tried to eat the whole thing on your own. Dare I say...cloyingly sweet? Yes, I do.
What do You think about The Sweet One (2010)?
I'm in need of a dentist. Sweetness.put that one in the Yaoi shelve.
—lonerojames
I've read this twice and cried both times. Such a wonderful story
—murf
Enjoyable short story. As it says, sweet..
—mrose97
